Post by Eagle on Jun 14, 2006 3:04:10 GMT -5
Name: Thunderstar
Age: 34
Gender: Tom
Clan: RiverClan
Rank: Leader
Picture(Opptional): www.siberiafrost.ru/ratibor_photo_eng.htm
Description: Thunderstar is a huge silver tabby, with long flowing fur that almost brushes the ground. He has only a small stump for a tail. His eyes are a stunning teal color, that will change from light green, to a steal grey depending on his mood. His pelt is home to a few scars, are his right ear has a chunk missing.
Personality: Thunderstar is usally very even tempered, but when anyone messes with his Clan, he turns deadly. He has respect for the tiniest kit to the frailest elder. If you lose his respect you'll have to work to get it back. He hates Rouges because of his past.
History: Thunderstar was born in RiverClan to the old Leader, Jaggedstar, and his mate, Thunderheart. When Thunderheart kitted, she only had one huge tom kit, which killed her. Jaggedstar named his son Thunderkit in honnor of his late mother. A kind Queen named Peachblossom fostered him, and treated him like her own kit. Jaggedstar 'spoiled' his only kit, and planned to mentor him when the time came. Jaggedstar never told Thunderkit that Peachblossom wasn't his realy mother, until the night before he was to be an apprentice. Thunderkit pretended it didn't bother him, but deep down inside it hurt. He ran away, never to be seen by his father again.
Thunderkit wandered for moons, lost and confused. Until he reached a RougeBand, who welcomed the young, huge tom. The leader, a red tom named Blood, shortened Thunderkit's name to just Thunder. Thunder fought along side the rouges, enjoying himself. Until the day he met Blood's 'toy' Amrita. She was a beautiful young golden she-cat, that Blood treated like a object, not a living cat. Thunder would offen sneak in to see her, bringing her fresh food, and water. He grew to know her well, and she grew to trust him. He learned she was really a very sweet cat, who's spirit had be broken, and she learned he wasn't like the other rouges. Thunder felt bad for her, but he wasn't old enough, or strong enough to take on Blood over it, after all, he was only 10 moons old.
One day, Blood chose him to go on patrol with him, a rare honor. Thunder took advantage of his time only to ask Blood about Amrita. When he suggested he trade Amrita out for a new 'toy' Blood just laughed. Thunder continued meeting in secret with Amrita, bring her food, and enjoying her company. This went on for another 10 moons, by then Thunder had almost doubled in size, and towered over the other rouges, even Blood, but only by a few inches. He still was very inexperinced compared to Blood, which is why he didn't challenge him for Amrita's freedom, and Thunder had gotten used to the way it was. Amrita belonged to Blood, Blood used her when he felt like it, and treated her like a object. Thunder brought Amrita fresh food, and talked to her. By now, it would have been strange anyother way.
Until one awful day, the day his world turned up-side-down. It started out as a normal day, Thunder was now 23 moons, he had just gotten back from his morning hunt, dropping his pile of rats, then grabbed the only vole he had caught for Amrita. He snuck around to the back of the den, and slipped through the hole, which felt smaller and smaller everyday. When she didn't greet him right away, he knew something was wrong. He called out softly for her, until he saw a gold lump lying in a corner, covered in blood. He rushed over to Amrita, to find her alive, but hurt badly. After cleaning her up, and comferting her, she told him she had tried to get away from Blood, and he attacked her. Thunder was enraged, and quickly left to go find Blood, and put a stop on this madness. Before he had a chance, Blood announced they where going to attack a Clan, not just any old Clan, but RiverClan.
At first Thunder didn't care, no memories coming back to him, and his new lothing for Blood clouding his mind. Thunder decided to wait until after the battle, hopfully Blood would be wounded and weaked, making him a easy kill. When they arrived at camp, hiding in the reeds, a huge moltted grey tom, and two others came out, and soon padded out of sight. That huge tom looked strangly framiler to Thunder, but Blood gave the signal to attack, and he pushed it out of his mind.
The rouges brought chaos down on the camp. Thunder was fighting the Deputy, Shadowfire, when a scream for help came from the nursery. A old Queen was being drug out by Blacksoul, a rouge full of dismay, the Queen was screaming for the Leader, and to save her kits. Something about this Queen stirred something deep inside Thunder, he raced toward her, intending to save her, when Blood beat him there. He took her from Blacksoul, and beckoned to Thunder. "Come Thunder! Shut this old fool up, then kill the kits!" He ordered, giving the Queen a violent shake. Thunder watched in horror, not sure of what he should do.
"Thunder? Thunder! It's me, your 'mother', Peachblossom, please don't kill me!" The old Queen pleaded. Thunder stopped dead in his tracks. And began to beg Blood to let her go. Blood, who was disgusted by his best fighter's new found 'emotion'. He then killed Peachblossom in front of Thunder's eyes. Thunder attacked Blood, then after he thought him dead, ran back to the rouge camp to free Amrita.
They roamed freely for many moons, until one a day a RiverClanner tracked them down, and told them Jaggedstar had died, and StarClan's will was for Thunder to become leader. He did, but Amrita refused to join the Clan. Thunderstar hasn't seen his love for 10 moons.
RP Example(Optional): ||OOC: I might do this later.||
Age: 34
Gender: Tom
Clan: RiverClan
Rank: Leader
Picture(Opptional): www.siberiafrost.ru/ratibor_photo_eng.htm
Description: Thunderstar is a huge silver tabby, with long flowing fur that almost brushes the ground. He has only a small stump for a tail. His eyes are a stunning teal color, that will change from light green, to a steal grey depending on his mood. His pelt is home to a few scars, are his right ear has a chunk missing.
Personality: Thunderstar is usally very even tempered, but when anyone messes with his Clan, he turns deadly. He has respect for the tiniest kit to the frailest elder. If you lose his respect you'll have to work to get it back. He hates Rouges because of his past.
History: Thunderstar was born in RiverClan to the old Leader, Jaggedstar, and his mate, Thunderheart. When Thunderheart kitted, she only had one huge tom kit, which killed her. Jaggedstar named his son Thunderkit in honnor of his late mother. A kind Queen named Peachblossom fostered him, and treated him like her own kit. Jaggedstar 'spoiled' his only kit, and planned to mentor him when the time came. Jaggedstar never told Thunderkit that Peachblossom wasn't his realy mother, until the night before he was to be an apprentice. Thunderkit pretended it didn't bother him, but deep down inside it hurt. He ran away, never to be seen by his father again.
Thunderkit wandered for moons, lost and confused. Until he reached a RougeBand, who welcomed the young, huge tom. The leader, a red tom named Blood, shortened Thunderkit's name to just Thunder. Thunder fought along side the rouges, enjoying himself. Until the day he met Blood's 'toy' Amrita. She was a beautiful young golden she-cat, that Blood treated like a object, not a living cat. Thunder would offen sneak in to see her, bringing her fresh food, and water. He grew to know her well, and she grew to trust him. He learned she was really a very sweet cat, who's spirit had be broken, and she learned he wasn't like the other rouges. Thunder felt bad for her, but he wasn't old enough, or strong enough to take on Blood over it, after all, he was only 10 moons old.
One day, Blood chose him to go on patrol with him, a rare honor. Thunder took advantage of his time only to ask Blood about Amrita. When he suggested he trade Amrita out for a new 'toy' Blood just laughed. Thunder continued meeting in secret with Amrita, bring her food, and enjoying her company. This went on for another 10 moons, by then Thunder had almost doubled in size, and towered over the other rouges, even Blood, but only by a few inches. He still was very inexperinced compared to Blood, which is why he didn't challenge him for Amrita's freedom, and Thunder had gotten used to the way it was. Amrita belonged to Blood, Blood used her when he felt like it, and treated her like a object. Thunder brought Amrita fresh food, and talked to her. By now, it would have been strange anyother way.
Until one awful day, the day his world turned up-side-down. It started out as a normal day, Thunder was now 23 moons, he had just gotten back from his morning hunt, dropping his pile of rats, then grabbed the only vole he had caught for Amrita. He snuck around to the back of the den, and slipped through the hole, which felt smaller and smaller everyday. When she didn't greet him right away, he knew something was wrong. He called out softly for her, until he saw a gold lump lying in a corner, covered in blood. He rushed over to Amrita, to find her alive, but hurt badly. After cleaning her up, and comferting her, she told him she had tried to get away from Blood, and he attacked her. Thunder was enraged, and quickly left to go find Blood, and put a stop on this madness. Before he had a chance, Blood announced they where going to attack a Clan, not just any old Clan, but RiverClan.
At first Thunder didn't care, no memories coming back to him, and his new lothing for Blood clouding his mind. Thunder decided to wait until after the battle, hopfully Blood would be wounded and weaked, making him a easy kill. When they arrived at camp, hiding in the reeds, a huge moltted grey tom, and two others came out, and soon padded out of sight. That huge tom looked strangly framiler to Thunder, but Blood gave the signal to attack, and he pushed it out of his mind.
The rouges brought chaos down on the camp. Thunder was fighting the Deputy, Shadowfire, when a scream for help came from the nursery. A old Queen was being drug out by Blacksoul, a rouge full of dismay, the Queen was screaming for the Leader, and to save her kits. Something about this Queen stirred something deep inside Thunder, he raced toward her, intending to save her, when Blood beat him there. He took her from Blacksoul, and beckoned to Thunder. "Come Thunder! Shut this old fool up, then kill the kits!" He ordered, giving the Queen a violent shake. Thunder watched in horror, not sure of what he should do.
"Thunder? Thunder! It's me, your 'mother', Peachblossom, please don't kill me!" The old Queen pleaded. Thunder stopped dead in his tracks. And began to beg Blood to let her go. Blood, who was disgusted by his best fighter's new found 'emotion'. He then killed Peachblossom in front of Thunder's eyes. Thunder attacked Blood, then after he thought him dead, ran back to the rouge camp to free Amrita.
They roamed freely for many moons, until one a day a RiverClanner tracked them down, and told them Jaggedstar had died, and StarClan's will was for Thunder to become leader. He did, but Amrita refused to join the Clan. Thunderstar hasn't seen his love for 10 moons.
RP Example(Optional): ||OOC: I might do this later.||
But if you dont finish it within two mroe days, I will put Riverclan Leader back up for grabs.